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why bother with first?

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It’s nice to just send something out into space, so much more vague and abstract (and pleasantly so) than having my thoughts in print, right there, in black and white. Blogs are on the web, which is some ephemeral technology that I don’t fully understand anyway, and can’t really comprehend in the same way that I can’t really comprehend a billion dollars. Meaningless. Therefore I write all kinds of things that I probably would never say or write in real life, because it tickles me and it doesn’t really do any harm anyway because in a few days the entry will be buried in the archives and the three people that have read it will be busy with other things.

Thursday, February 23, 2006

My First Poem

My very first poem, in honor of prehistoric penguins

Prehistoric Penguin

Two hundred twenty pounds
Sealed tight in four layer feathers

Waddling like chapel windows
Milling on the floe
Children in tow

Deadly intent bellying down the slide
Slipping under beak first
Dive bombing the deep blue

What is black and white and red all over?
Bloody penguin battle
Bald eagle's second cousin in the sea

Tuxedoed birds are nothing to mock
When they've got seventy pounds on you.

2 Comments:

Blogger Amber said...

This is excellent. Great imagery, AND it made me laugh. Congratulations on your first poem being totally awesome.

1:16 PM  
Blogger erin said...

thanks!

1:17 PM  

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